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Things have a way of changing.
A chapter in the book Flash Fiction
I Hate You - I do!
by Begin Again
"I hate you, Tommy."
"It's a crime your mommy dropped you when you were born."
"You're a monster."
"You're an ugly four-eyed creature from the deep."
At eight, Kelly and Tommy couldn't finish a sentence without tormenting each other.
Over the years, Kelly grew from ugly duckling to stunning beauty.
On her sixteenth birthday, her family and friends celebrated. Tommy's best friend, Jake, planted a kiss on Kelly's soft lips. Before she could protest, Tommy stormed from the room, shattering her heart.
Later that night, Tommy came back to apologize for making a scene. Running away angry had been a mistake.
They walked along the river. Tommy held her hand. The moon was shining, stars dotted the sky, and fireworks went off in Kelly's head when Tommy kissed her lips.
Today, four years later, Tommy promised "till death do us part" and kissed his bride.
Kelly whispered, "I love you."
100 Word Story writing prompt entry
"I hate you, Tommy."
"It's a crime your mommy dropped you when you were born."
"You're a monster."
"You're an ugly four-eyed creature from the deep."
At eight, Kelly and Tommy couldn't finish a sentence without tormenting each other.
Over the years, Kelly grew from ugly duckling to stunning beauty.
On her sixteenth birthday, her family and friends celebrated. Tommy's best friend, Jake, planted a kiss on Kelly's soft lips. Before she could protest, Tommy stormed from the room, shattering her heart.
Later that night, Tommy came back to apologize for making a scene. Running away angry had been a mistake.
They walked along the river. Tommy held her hand. The moon was shining, stars dotted the sky, and fireworks went off in Kelly's head when Tommy kissed her lips.
Today, four years later, Tommy promised "till death do us part" and kissed his bride.
Kelly whispered, "I love you."
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Writing Prompt Write a story that is between 100 and 150 words. The trick is you must use the following words: love - hate - heart - beauty - monster - death - family - creature - sentence - crime - scene - mistake. Words may be used in differet formats (for example: sentence, sentences or sentencing) |
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Word Count - 150
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