Romance Poetry posted March 30, 2011 | Chapters: |
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A brief but enveloping interlude. 6-7-7-6 meter
A chapter in the book Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces
Away For Two
by Blue-Stubby
Meet me at the lamp post
after the suns' hid a spell; A trio of heartfelt words my lips so long to tell. Keep it as a secret that we plan to rendezvous and I'll lift you in my arms whispering I love you. We'll run to Jacob's barn, go climbing up in the hay and hold you like I dream of 'till sunrise wakes the day. We can't lay lingering past the cooing morning dove; It's back to the trellis when we've filled up with our love. As your Father's daughter, you are his bright shining sun but I am the hired help fearing hot lead from his gun. When I am the foreman of his flourishing estate, I will come calling proper swinging the front yard gate. At this hour we embrace taking love close to the edge and hopefully time itself won't drive a parting wedge. |
This piece is a simple attempt to tell a story that has been so many times by lovers that hide away and steal moments of loving passion. The 6-7-7-6 meter was an attempt the find a consistent flow with inverted and lengthier center body lines within each stanza.
Nothing fancy or outrageous, just a form within which my story was constructed.
Pays
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and 2 member cents. Nothing fancy or outrageous, just a form within which my story was constructed.






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