Nonsense Poem
Use 3 words25 total reviews
Comment from teafor2
Un-named scribe, a melodious and humorous creative bit of none-sense
indeed presented in this rhymed saturated (internal and end) three quatrains rendering...The title, picture, theme and tone all complement each satirical element. Good luck with this in the contest. teafor2
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Un-named scribe, a melodious and humorous creative bit of none-sense
indeed presented in this rhymed saturated (internal and end) three quatrains rendering...The title, picture, theme and tone all complement each satirical element. Good luck with this in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a good 3 word poem. It appears you have included the three words in your poem. This poem is well organized and flows quite nicely.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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This is a good 3 word poem. It appears you have included the three words in your poem. This poem is well organized and flows quite nicely.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Tank you.
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You're welcome
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a fun verse! You've really captured the nonsense mood of this eye-catching visual and included the three words in a verse which, with its delightful rhyming patterns, is an absolute pleasure to read. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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What a fun verse! You've really captured the nonsense mood of this eye-catching visual and included the three words in a verse which, with its delightful rhyming patterns, is an absolute pleasure to read. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much Debbie.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are creative, eccentric and creative. I enjoy the
reading of this poem. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork
goes well with the theme and words of this poem. Great poem!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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The author's words are creative, eccentric and creative. I enjoy the
reading of this poem. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork
goes well with the theme and words of this poem. Great poem!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This poem made me giggle. It reminded my about how I was when I had the flu in January. This person seems to be dealing with her cold fine.
I like the mixture of internal and end rhyme. It makes the flow better and makes in seem or of a nonsense poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a good week.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Hi
This poem made me giggle. It reminded my about how I was when I had the flu in January. This person seems to be dealing with her cold fine.
I like the mixture of internal and end rhyme. It makes the flow better and makes in seem or of a nonsense poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a good week.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much Joan!
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You're most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This is the most entertaining thing I've read all day!
This was fun from beginning to end; you not only used the three required words, but "kerchew", "malady," and "schmalady," as well. Here's hoping this goes hopping and bopping straight to the top of the podium!
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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This is the most entertaining thing I've read all day!
This was fun from beginning to end; you not only used the three required words, but "kerchew", "malady," and "schmalady," as well. Here's hoping this goes hopping and bopping straight to the top of the podium!
xo
Pam
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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haha, Pam, such a fun review! Thanks so much!
Comment from Boogienights
What a fun poem....children would love it. You definitely did a great job of incorporating the 3 words, and it was fun to read. I'm in the contest too, so l wish you well, to be in second place! Lol. :)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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What a fun poem....children would love it. You definitely did a great job of incorporating the 3 words, and it was fun to read. I'm in the contest too, so l wish you well, to be in second place! Lol. :)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Haha... that is so funny Sharon!! Wouldn't it be nice to tie :). I had fun doing this one, but I'm not getting many reviews... I think it's the wicked looking little girl I'm using as art 8). Good luck to you too!!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Absolutely delightful, Mystery Writer!
Your descriptive words just made me smile on this snowbound Monday morning!
One little nit, if I may:
I'm wimpy and gimpy (;) I've stubbed my big toe,
Best wishes!
fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Absolutely delightful, Mystery Writer!
Your descriptive words just made me smile on this snowbound Monday morning!
One little nit, if I may:
I'm wimpy and gimpy (;) I've stubbed my big toe,
Best wishes!
fondly,
diane
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much Diane!
Comment from Barry Penfold
Really nice effort. Love the image and the wording. Good rhyming make s this an easy read> Thanks for sharing and I hope you do well in the contest.Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards.
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Really nice effort. Love the image and the wording. Good rhyming make s this an easy read> Thanks for sharing and I hope you do well in the contest.Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards.
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much Barry!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I can see WHY you need to get rest! You sound as if you're running around on nervous energy...plus you're sick with that malady/schmalady cold! The Jewish Mommie in me wants to run you a hot bath, make you some matzoh ball soup and tell you to get in your jammies or ELSE! You are not doing a great job taking care of your run-down self, Mystery Contestant!!
But you sure did do a great job with this writing prompt!! I hope it does well for you in the polls!!
PS - what a VERY cool picture that sets the stage for the perfectly zany contest entry. xoxo
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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I can see WHY you need to get rest! You sound as if you're running around on nervous energy...plus you're sick with that malady/schmalady cold! The Jewish Mommie in me wants to run you a hot bath, make you some matzoh ball soup and tell you to get in your jammies or ELSE! You are not doing a great job taking care of your run-down self, Mystery Contestant!!
But you sure did do a great job with this writing prompt!! I hope it does well for you in the polls!!
PS - what a VERY cool picture that sets the stage for the perfectly zany contest entry. xoxo
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much Rachelle! So glad you liked it.
