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Remembering Yesterday

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A widow's journey into her relationship with her

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Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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You sure had your hands full, with your nephew, Jimmy! He does sound like he was very unstable for awhile, until he got himself together. Maybe what he needed was to spend some time taking care of his own mother, or just being with her -- or maybe finding the right person in life made the difference, although one is seldom in a position to do that, until one's head is on straight, first.

Errors and suggestions:

OUR nephew comes to visit.
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Our nephew comes to visit.

Sometime things work out.
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Sometimes things work out.

Bill Clinton was the Democrat candidate.
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Bill Clinton was the Democratic candidate.

In November Bill Clinton won making George Bush a one term president.
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In November Bill Clinton won, making George Bush a one term president.

we had no way of knowing of the changes which were in store for a couple of members of our family before this year would end. [you never mentioned what year it was, although it may have been 1992, if I remember correctly from the previous chapter]

***

Hmm... big changes coming up in the family? Must be with Carol and Glen, but I don't know who else might possibly have major life events going on. I guess we'll find out.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much for the revivew and comment as as usual, you great help. I added the year, 1992, so there wouldn't be a question.
    Yes, Jimmy's mom needed him. Her house had, over the years, become a dangerous place to live. Jimmy fixed it up so that it could be sold.
    Beth
Comment from mermaids
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This is a positive story, Jimmy met the right lady and remained married. I remember the election and how popular Ross Perot was. Your various relatives are interesting people to write about.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
    Thank you for the review and comments. I'm glad this comes across as positive.
    Beth
Comment from MAMONIA
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Jimmy could not be one of my favorites. Luckily, he found someone to share his life with. Having long-lasting guests is not one of my favorite things. I love visits, but short and sweet, before they begin to smell.
You've kept things interesting in the telling of your story, and I am sure that your children will get a kick out of Jimmy, going from a high-ranking official to a human being.
Great stuff you have here.
Marie

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
    Thanks for reading this story too. Jimmy had a lot of problem but I'm glad he finally found someone who was the kind of person he needed in his life.
    Beth
Comment from Alaskastory
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"Our Nephew, Jimmy" is written in an unusual way that I'm not familiar with, but it does add interest. Certainly from the beginning, my complete attention stayed with the whole story. Well done!

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much for stopping by and reading this. I'm glad you liked it. I hope to see you again.
    Beth
Comment from lyenochka
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Wow! You and Evan were so hospitable letting your relatives come and stay for so long. And I agree - it's not safe having Christi's customers come to your personal home! Thanks for the election year information, too. I remember that one and Sesame Street had a muppet called Ross Parrot. I guess a third candidate can draw away votes. That's probably why the parties back just one candidate.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much for the revew and raising it again with your member pump. That is so generous of you.
    Beth
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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You left us with an interesting hook about what is to come during that year. I remember that year very well. I am pretty sure our country started going downhill with Bill Clinton. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
    Thank you Barbara. I apprecaite your review and comments. Yes, I should have voted for Bush. I think Bill Clinton didn't have the character he needed to be president.
    Beth
reply by barbara.wilkey on 04-Jul-2021
    He did not and the US is still having issues because of him. I dislike wife even more than him.
Comment from Begin Again
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Good morning, Beth...so sorry I am behind on reviewing but as you so well know...life throws us a curve now and then. Your story has left the reader wondering what storms are approaching. Glad Jimmy finally got his life together...some people never do. Thanks for sharing. Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
    Thank you Carol. I have no idea how you manage to lead such a busy life and be so active on FanStory. I know you have a lot of trauma in your own life. I'm hoping things will soon be better for your granddaughter and your own life will be free of so much stress.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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Jimmy finally made it! He did seem to have a troubled life with the first five marriages. He finally saw the light. Perhaps those years in between taught him a thing or two.
The election-year you speak of was quite intriguing. Bill Clinton was a big surprise and he handily won, despite the Perot threat.

Ralf

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
    Thank you again for continuing to read my story. I always enjoy reading your comments.
    Beth
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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I think your book it;s a live radiography of the American dream with the bad the good and the evil. You had a life full of events including the political events that changed the faith of the world. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
    Thank you Iza. I really appreciate your reviews and comments. I'm telling it like it is, and it does contain the good, the bad and the ugly. I'm glad you're hanging in there with me.
    Beth
Comment from pome lover
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An interesting chapter. Hopefully your son didn't have to pay alimony to his past wives.
Know you were glad when his last marriage was successful and his outlook
on life changed.
I love that throughout you're talking to your husband. I feel sure he hears you.
Best,
Katharine

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much for the review and comments. I'm happy to say Jimmy wasn't our son, but rather a nephew. However there will be divorces in my own family. We didn't have anyone who married six times, however.
    Beth