Remembering Yesterday
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Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Life with your family was never dull! This particular chapter was a little bit like a soap opera, but the incident with Connie's friend's sister being involved in a murder plot probably had your hair standing on end. Then her friend was killed, in a drunk driving accident; it's all very tragic... the rest isn't too bad, but there really was so much going on!
Not too many errors and suggestions:
Christi ended up borrowing $250 from Carol ...
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Christi ended up borrowing $250 from Carol, ...
Pam had found an apartment she planned to move into it,
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Pam had found an apartment she planned to move into,
If she got back to college the next semester ...
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If she got back to college the next semester, ...
Other things that had happened during April of 1994 in this country was the death of ex-president Richard Nixon from a stroke, and a little later the death of Jackie Kennedy Onassis.
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Other things that had happened during April of 1994 in this country were the death of ex-president Richard Nixon from a stroke, and a little later, the death of Jackie Kennedy Onassis.
...as a result of the Summer experience.
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...as a result of the summer experience.
it was never dull for long
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it was never dull for long.
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You had a good philosophy; even though your daughters used your washing machine and washed their cars so much, you were happy to see them!
Don is better with construction, than he is with cars.
And Christi has an admirer.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Life with your family was never dull! This particular chapter was a little bit like a soap opera, but the incident with Connie's friend's sister being involved in a murder plot probably had your hair standing on end. Then her friend was killed, in a drunk driving accident; it's all very tragic... the rest isn't too bad, but there really was so much going on!
Not too many errors and suggestions:
Christi ended up borrowing $250 from Carol ...
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Christi ended up borrowing $250 from Carol, ...
Pam had found an apartment she planned to move into it,
-->
Pam had found an apartment she planned to move into,
If she got back to college the next semester ...
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If she got back to college the next semester, ...
Other things that had happened during April of 1994 in this country was the death of ex-president Richard Nixon from a stroke, and a little later the death of Jackie Kennedy Onassis.
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Other things that had happened during April of 1994 in this country were the death of ex-president Richard Nixon from a stroke, and a little later, the death of Jackie Kennedy Onassis.
...as a result of the Summer experience.
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...as a result of the summer experience.
it was never dull for long
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it was never dull for long.
***
You had a good philosophy; even though your daughters used your washing machine and washed their cars so much, you were happy to see them!
Don is better with construction, than he is with cars.
And Christi has an admirer.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Mary Kay. You know I always feel better about what I've written after you've had your eagle eye one and told me what I need to fix. I guess my life does sound line a soap opera sometimes, thanks to my children. They seem to attract all the drama.
Beth
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You're very welcome, Beth. Yes, they do seem to attract drama, but this chapter was particularly full of twists and turns. Your love as their mother, and Evan's wife, always shines through. God bless you and your family! Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Well done retelling of this time in your life. Your kids didn't want you to be bored, it seems. I didn't get the idea of adding historical facts to your earlier chapters but now it seems like a very good idea.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Well done retelling of this time in your life. Your kids didn't want you to be bored, it seems. I didn't get the idea of adding historical facts to your earlier chapters but now it seems like a very good idea.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you Carol, I appreciae the review and the nice comments.
Beth
Comment from royowen
What interesting lives your kids have lived, they say we can't choose our families but we can choose our friends. I must admit if God hadn't of intervened in my train wreck of my life I don't know where'd I'd be now, probably dead I suspect, but God is in the business of putting people back together, just look at the trouble His Son did to make it happen, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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What interesting lives your kids have lived, they say we can't choose our families but we can choose our friends. I must admit if God hadn't of intervened in my train wreck of my life I don't know where'd I'd be now, probably dead I suspect, but God is in the business of putting people back together, just look at the trouble His Son did to make it happen, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Thank you Roy. A lot of what I am writing makes my family look bad, but I'm being honest. We weren't perfect and I'm not going to sugarcoat it. Maybe my children will want to do better when they read some of the things they put us through.
Beth
Beth
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You did the best you could Beth, you have nothing to reproach yourself for, our kids make their own decisions, I sometimes think I could have done better, but it is what it is. I think God intervened a lot in my foolish youth. I can only praise Him, He loved me far more than I deserve. Well done Beth, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am glad you continue to recall these memories. Most of us have memories of that time period.
Connie had a lot of male friends that she did things with, but her main boyfriend, after Lenny, was J.P. ('friends who', you grammar check may say 'that' but 'who' is correct.)
He couldn't believe that the sister Carol had said so many negative things about could actually be the same person. (omit 'that')
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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I am glad you continue to recall these memories. Most of us have memories of that time period.
Connie had a lot of male friends that she did things with, but her main boyfriend, after Lenny, was J.P. ('friends who', you grammar check may say 'that' but 'who' is correct.)
He couldn't believe that the sister Carol had said so many negative things about could actually be the same person. (omit 'that')
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Barbara. I use the word "that" all the time when I'm talking and I'm trying to quit saying it so often, but it isn't easy. I have reviewer who keep wanting me to add "that". T appreciate your help.
Beth
Comment from damommy
I think it is wonderful that you're doing this and leaving a record for your children and grandchildren. I can imagine it's very helpful for you, too, to share with your husband. Thank you for sharing with us.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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I think it is wonderful that you're doing this and leaving a record for your children and grandchildren. I can imagine it's very helpful for you, too, to share with your husband. Thank you for sharing with us.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for the review and the commnts. I'm doing mostly for the children, but I don't want to leave my husband out. We had a good life, but he was quiet natured, and let me do most of the talking. I'm am afraid my children didn't really know him like I did.
Beth
Beth
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I think this is a lovely thing to do.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
It is obvious you and Evan supplied the love and security your children needed. I can tell that because home is where Mom and Dad was, not a special house they were raised in.
They know they can return when it is needed. Our children always knew they had a home with us. Can't wait to see what the summer brings to Connie's life. Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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It is obvious you and Evan supplied the love and security your children needed. I can tell that because home is where Mom and Dad was, not a special house they were raised in.
They know they can return when it is needed. Our children always knew they had a home with us. Can't wait to see what the summer brings to Connie's life. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. Please let me know when you post something.
Beth
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I will probably post the next chapter tomorrow, Beth. Thanks for being so loyal. Nancy:)
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sam Shepard, actually, Sam Shepard Rogers, a name few know, once told me that honesty is the most important part of good writing. And I guess he knew, since he was an academy award winning actor, writer, playwright, and I'm sure anything else he set out to do. You are a wonderful example of an honest writer who pours it all out there week after week. They don't give us enough sixes to reward you every week as you deserve, but this week I won't miss the chance. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Sam Shepard, actually, Sam Shepard Rogers, a name few know, once told me that honesty is the most important part of good writing. And I guess he knew, since he was an academy award winning actor, writer, playwright, and I'm sure anything else he set out to do. You are a wonderful example of an honest writer who pours it all out there week after week. They don't give us enough sixes to reward you every week as you deserve, but this week I won't miss the chance. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Ric. I really appreciate your reviews. I am letting all the bad things as well as the good out. Some of the things I write about my family doesn't make us look so good. Our mistakes are out there for everyone to see. I'm glad you apporve of the honesty of it. I'm so pleased you feel it is worthy of six stars.
Beth
Comment from Ulla
Hi Beth, It is certainly true that you never have a dull moment in your family.
It must have been a shock for Connie to find out that her best friend's sister was involved in a murder plot. I'm glad they all got caught.
In this chapter the girls don't seem all that happy.
I'm looking forward to see which direction Connie's life is taking.
As you know, I'm enjoying reading this. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Hi Beth, It is certainly true that you never have a dull moment in your family.
It must have been a shock for Connie to find out that her best friend's sister was involved in a murder plot. I'm glad they all got caught.
In this chapter the girls don't seem all that happy.
I'm looking forward to see which direction Connie's life is taking.
As you know, I'm enjoying reading this. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Thank you Ulla. I'm so pleased that you still find my story interesting. You know I appreciate you reviewing and leaving your comments.
Beth
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I'm always looking forward to it. :)))
Comment from Judy Lawless
You certainly didn't have any dull moments in your life, Beth. Reading all this left my head spinning! I don't know how you kept track of all the boyfriends, and that murder-for-hire thing was bizarre! I like the cliff-hanger that left us wondering what was going to change Connie's life so much. Great job of telling the story.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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You certainly didn't have any dull moments in your life, Beth. Reading all this left my head spinning! I don't know how you kept track of all the boyfriends, and that murder-for-hire thing was bizarre! I like the cliff-hanger that left us wondering what was going to change Connie's life so much. Great job of telling the story.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Judy. I really appreciate the review and comments. '
Beth
Comment from tfawcus
This continues to provide a fascinating insight into family life and the cross-currents and dynamics that run between various family members. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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This continues to provide a fascinating insight into family life and the cross-currents and dynamics that run between various family members. Nicely written.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Tony. I appreciate you reading this segament of my family life.
Beth
