Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 85 "My Yearning"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from Ginda Simpson
You have created an enticing landscape with your pen. Who wouldn't be drawn to yearning for a special person to share it with. Lovely sentiment expressed with a heartfelt vocabulary.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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You have created an enticing landscape with your pen. Who wouldn't be drawn to yearning for a special person to share it with. Lovely sentiment expressed with a heartfelt vocabulary.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Sensei
Poet Word Weaver
Comment from dragonpoet
This tanka meshes well with the painting. It tells of the beauty and peace of the mountain scene.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas.
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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This tanka meshes well with the painting. It tells of the beauty and peace of the mountain scene.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas.
Joan
Comment Written 24-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Merry Christmas eve!
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver
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You are very welcome on all accounts, MariVal.
Merry Christmas.
Joan
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Feet caress cotton candy clouds is so alliterative and fun to say out loud. This is definitely a tanka in mount love which is close to where you live and is an outstanding name for a mountain.
Thanks for showing us all how to write with style and panache.
Jesse
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Feet caress cotton candy clouds is so alliterative and fun to say out loud. This is definitely a tanka in mount love which is close to where you live and is an outstanding name for a mountain.
Thanks for showing us all how to write with style and panache.
Jesse
Comment Written 24-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Merry Christmas eve!
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver
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Merry Christmas to you, Gypsy.
Jesse
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Good has given us so much to enjoy and the beautiful clouds are just a small part of His creation. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us. I know God is smiling down on you.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Good has given us so much to enjoy and the beautiful clouds are just a small part of His creation. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us. I know God is smiling down on you.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Barbara, yes, God is love and part of everything.
Gypsy Sensei
Happy Holidays and a prosperous new year!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem is displaying cotton candy clouds. Love the idea of your clouds being fluffy, light, and moving with grace and softness. I hope you do well on this poem.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Your poem is displaying cotton candy clouds. Love the idea of your clouds being fluffy, light, and moving with grace and softness. I hope you do well on this poem.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Rosemarie, I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy Sensei
Happy Holidays and a prosperous new year!
Comment from royowen
A lovely tanka celebrating the creation, that the Lord has given us to enjoy, this is a language rich personification of the very inheritance we have been given. Thank you Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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A lovely tanka celebrating the creation, that the Lord has given us to enjoy, this is a language rich personification of the very inheritance we have been given. Thank you Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Roy, I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy Sensei
Happy Holidays and a prosperous new year!
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Most welcome
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka poem- good picture presentation and connection between lines- Mount Love woven in nicely- good information in notes to support - along with cotton candy clouds and rushing creeks - good job AP. ( How many poems this year ??? should be a record?
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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I like your Tanka poem- good picture presentation and connection between lines- Mount Love woven in nicely- good information in notes to support - along with cotton candy clouds and rushing creeks - good job AP. ( How many poems this year ??? should be a record?
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
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By December 31st, it will be 730 poems. ... 2 a day.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy new year!
Gypsy Sensei
Poet Word Weaver
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AMAZING!! Congratulations!
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, My Yearning, has the proper formatting and finds one floating above the world with only the fondest effects from below to remind all that, still below, our hearts are in the stream.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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This tanka, My Yearning, has the proper formatting and finds one floating above the world with only the fondest effects from below to remind all that, still below, our hearts are in the stream.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much, Bill, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Happy Holidays!
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your poetry is always so lovely. You add some of the most spectacular pictures to the poems. I never heard of Mount Love, so I have learned something new today. Beautiful writing.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Your poetry is always so lovely. You add some of the most spectacular pictures to the poems. I never heard of Mount Love, so I have learned something new today. Beautiful writing.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much, Prettybluebirds, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver
Comment from aryr
This was indeed a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The picture was so beautiful that it actually took my breath away. Your words were inspirational and to me explained satisfactorily your Mount Love. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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This was indeed a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The picture was so beautiful that it actually took my breath away. Your words were inspirational and to me explained satisfactorily your Mount Love. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and helpfull feedback, Aryr. Blessed be and hugs.
Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver
