Romance Poetry posted December 23, 2022 Chapters:  ...83 84 -85- 86... 


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4/6/5/8/8. Tanka

A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

My Yearning

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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yearning for you
glides over green Mount Love
 in warm summer breeze   —
 
feet caress cotton candy clouds
& heart beats to rushing creeks

 
 
 
 

 




Mount Love is a real mountain close to my home in southern California.

Tanka is one of the oldest types of Japanese poetry. It begun in the Emperial Court, where lovers exchanged a tanka after a night of lovemaking.

Tanka in Japan, is 31 syllables in a 5/7/5/7/7 form, but in English is 31 syllables OR LESS in a short/long/short/long/long format.

For examples click here

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