2024 Japanese Poetry
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14 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
Congratulations on post number 3500! You are a prolific author of immense talent!
You broke from your usual iridescent twilight color scheme feel in this one. I like it. A six for my favorite poet!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Congratulations on post number 3500! You are a prolific author of immense talent!
You broke from your usual iridescent twilight color scheme feel in this one. I like it. A six for my favorite poet!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Douglas, you one of my top fanstory friends. I appreciate you are always so kind. Thank you for the exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Navada
Congratulations on your milestone post! 3500 - wow! As an Aussie, we are very familiar with bushfires and I could really resonate with your images and description. For all their destructiveness, fires do generate regrowth. Some plant's seeds can only grow once fire has opened them up first.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Congratulations on your milestone post! 3500 - wow! As an Aussie, we are very familiar with bushfires and I could really resonate with your images and description. For all their destructiveness, fires do generate regrowth. Some plant's seeds can only grow once fire has opened them up first.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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I didn't know you are an Aussiie. I have many friends that are from Australia.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day, Navada.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sugarray77
Wow, Gypsy you made it to 3500. I am so impressed and want to congratulate you on this stellar achievement. So exciting. Your verse is dramatic and catches the reader's attention and holds it... well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Wow, Gypsy you made it to 3500. I am so impressed and want to congratulate you on this stellar achievement. So exciting. Your verse is dramatic and catches the reader's attention and holds it... well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day, Melissa.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This image is so sad because Canada had this happen to them in June of 2023. Also, California had fires in 2020. The fires were difficult to get under control. Your poem is a reminder.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This image is so sad because Canada had this happen to them in June of 2023. Also, California had fires in 2020. The fires were difficult to get under control. Your poem is a reminder.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and I was going to comment about another careless person with a cigarette or fireworks until I read your comments. I made assumptions based on the troubles we have around here
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and I was going to comment about another careless person with a cigarette or fireworks until I read your comments. I made assumptions based on the troubles we have around here
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
I'm all about renewal... in fact, I too have been feverish on my journey... on the journey of self discovery. Recently I have been choked down on the billowing clouds of smoke that have charred my edges and blackened my thoughts... but I do know... tomorrow is another day, an opportunity for greater possibilities leading to greener pastures.
I felt like I needed to read this stunning Gogyhka poem today for a reason... sent from a higher consciousness to still my ways... thank you!
With our thoughts we create...
renewed hope.
And congratulations on such a high achievement... 3500 writing posted... wow! Very Impressive my most talented wordsmith friend!
Warmest regards,
James.
Ps... where can I find your poem I read and now can't find? Yes, you know the one... Falling over the edge of sleep.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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Hi MariVal,
I'm all about renewal... in fact, I too have been feverish on my journey... on the journey of self discovery. Recently I have been choked down on the billowing clouds of smoke that have charred my edges and blackened my thoughts... but I do know... tomorrow is another day, an opportunity for greater possibilities leading to greener pastures.
I felt like I needed to read this stunning Gogyhka poem today for a reason... sent from a higher consciousness to still my ways... thank you!
With our thoughts we create...
renewed hope.
And congratulations on such a high achievement... 3500 writing posted... wow! Very Impressive my most talented wordsmith friend!
Warmest regards,
James.
Ps... where can I find your poem I read and now can't find? Yes, you know the one... Falling over the edge of sleep.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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I'm assuming you mean the Mediterranean sea. I'm sorry, I saved it in the wrong book. It was in my 2024 Gypsy's haiku, it's supposed to be in the 2024 Gypsy's free verse book.
Thank you very much for your exceptional review, as always, I love the way you understand my writing so well. I pray your green pastures are around the corner. Thank you for the exceptional six stars review... straight from the firmament we share.
Con cariņo,
Marival
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Thank you for the direction... I'll read it again soon... and yes, the beautiful word 'Firmament' . The magic of the azure sky within heaven! Sorta has that sound that tucks in and swaddles you at night.
(((((Jumbo Hugs)))))
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Firmament is almost identical to the Spanish translation... firmamento (*÷*)
Comment from aryr
The pictures prove that the fires were the way of controlling, Gypsy. It was the way of the farmers. Your words were all about controlling the fires. Very well done and sadly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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The pictures prove that the fires were the way of controlling, Gypsy. It was the way of the farmers. Your words were all about controlling the fires. Very well done and sadly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Aryr. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh congrats on post 3500! it's trippy when you realise how many you're posted lol!!
a great gogyohka! excellent imagery of smoky memories burning
smooth flow and line connection and cool pics and colours
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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ooh congrats on post 3500! it's trippy when you realise how many you're posted lol!!
a great gogyohka! excellent imagery of smoky memories burning
smooth flow and line connection and cool pics and colours
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Holy Moses!!! 3500 milestone post!! WOW!!! And not only that, but each poem has been fantastic, at least each one I've read. CONGRATULATIONS!!!! You are awesome and I am even more impressed that I was before. Wonderful. The poem is great too.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Holy Moses!!! 3500 milestone post!! WOW!!! And not only that, but each poem has been fantastic, at least each one I've read. CONGRATULATIONS!!!! You are awesome and I am even more impressed that I was before. Wonderful. The poem is great too.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your congratulations :)
Thank you very much, Barbara.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written, and I enjoyed listening to it. It reminds me of my own childhood when I was growing up on a farm and how that every year we would burn off the garden area for the next year's planting season. Have a wonderful day. Patricia
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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This is very well written, and I enjoyed listening to it. It reminds me of my own childhood when I was growing up on a farm and how that every year we would burn off the garden area for the next year's planting season. Have a wonderful day. Patricia
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend.
Gypsy hugs
