General Poetry posted March 15, 2008 Chapters:  ...12 13 -14- 15... 


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He passes first but she finishes alone.
A chapter in the book Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces

Till Death do us...

by Blue-Stubby


A life of loving commitment and companionship inevitably ends. To watch is heart wrenching. To happen is seemingly unfair. Lonesome years can be tortuous and punishing. Solitude can be bitter.
A tear rolls slowly
Wrinkled skin and trembling lips
Frail on bended knee
She mourns behind lace and silk
Their love journey now parted



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