Romance Poetry posted March 16, 2008 Chapters:  ...11 12 -13- 14... 


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Dispair transformed as tears and pity subside
A chapter in the book Spit, Gum and Shoe Laces

The Dawn of Reckoning

by Blue-Stubby


A tender soul is gradually beaten down by adulterated self-indulgent acts.
Early is the sun that creeps over the trees
Taunting me as I return from my lusting
My home seems strangely foreign to me
Is she waiting, wondering where I've been

The motor from the engine purrs quietly
A cloud of bluish smoke fills the cab
I exhale nervously from a lengthy draw
Is she waiting, wondering where I've been

My body saturated with another's sweet aroma
My stomach nauseated with subsequent guilt
My mind conjures lies for futile camouflage
Is she waiting, wondering where I've been

Innocent conversations inflated hidden desire
Passion carelessly fueled by efforts to impress
My immoral love has penetrated and created
Is she waiting, wondering where I've been

Through the dewy fog I pace toward the house
The untainted silence is shattered with vengeance
She kneels, whispering in my blood covered ear
I have been waiting and I know where you've been



Poetry Imagery contest entry


This piece has a non-fictional base that I unfortunately witnessed as a mutual third party friend over an extended period of time. The real life conclusion was not fatal but I often feared that it may happen. A lover scorned can be overcome with vengeance.
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