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Giving out only praise and 5+ stars across the board without critical feedback does not help writers.

If anyone receives a rating on my reviews of your work that doesn't seem right, let me know. Something strange is happening and the computer seems to be changing what I award. I'll try to double check everything, but if you see something that seems unusually low (usually less than 5), let me know and I'll try to correct it. Evi


2019 Short Works Writer of the Year
Dawn Munro
Poet Rating
Rank: 52
Short Works Rating
Rank: 6
Novel Rating
Script Rating
Review Stars
Rank: 105
by Robert Reich,Professor, former Secretary of Labor, Co-founder Inequality Media. Writes at robertreich.substack.com
Friends,
Let’s say you don’t like what the Trump administration is doing, or you don’t like Trump. You express these views on Facebook, TikTok, and Instagram.
You take a two-week vacation in France. When you try to return to the United States, U.S. immigration agents arrest you. They detain you in solitary confinement. They don’t let you contact your family. They don’t let you contact a lawyer. Then they send you to a brutal prison in El Salvador.
But wait! You scream over and over. You can’t do this! I’m an American citizen!
Your screams have no effect.
Sound far-fetched? Recently, a French scientist was prevented from entering the United States because U.S. Border Patrol agents had found messages from him in which he had expressed his “personal opinion” to colleagues and friends about Trump’s science policies.
In another case, immigration agents detained Dr. Rasha Alawieh, a kidney transplant specialist and professor at Brown University who was trying to return to the United States after visiting relatives in Lebanon.
Dr. Alawieh was not allowed to do that. She was deported despite having a valid visa and a court order blocking her removal. Federal authorities alleged that they found “sympathetic photos and videos of prominent Hezbollah figures” in her phone and that she attended the funeral for the leader of Hezbollah in February.
But these are just the Trump regime’s allegations. No court has been able to review this evidence.
U.S. border officials concede they’re using more aggressive tactics these days, which the administration calls “enhanced vetting,” at ports of entry to the United States.
Okay, so maybe you don’t go abroad. You just express views that the current U.S. government regime dislikes. As a result, U.S. government agents arrest and detain and then “disappear” you. They say you’re a threat to national security.
Again, not as far-fetched as it sounds.
The regime has begun to target legal immigrants in the United States who have expressed views that the Trump regime believes threaten national security and undermine foreign policy.
Investigators for Immigration and Customs Enforcement have been searching videos, online posts, and news clippings of campus protests against the Israel-Hamas war.
To deport people living in the United States with green cards or valid visas, the Trump regime has invoked a rarely used provision of the Immigration and Nationality Act that gives the secretary of state sweeping power to expel foreigners who are seen as a threat to the country’s foreign policy interests.
Using that authority, ICE agents arrested Mahmoud Khalil, a Columbia graduate who has Palestinian heritage and took on a prominent role in the pro-Palestinian protests at the school, and Badar Khan Suri, an Indian citizen who has been studying and teaching at Georgetown.
Mr. Khalil has a green card, which means he is a legal permanent resident.
Apparently, the State Department believes Dr. Suri engaged in antisemitic speech that would undermine diplomatic efforts to get Israel and Hamas to agree to a ceasefire. He is in the United States on a visa for academics.
On Monday night, Dr. Suri was surrounded by masked Homeland Security agents outside his home in Virginia, arrested, and placed in an unmarked SUV. A judge has temporarily blocked his removal from the country.
Karoline Leavitt, the White House press secretary, accuses Khalil of “siding with terrorists” and Dr. Suri of “spreading Hamas propaganda and promoting antisemitism on social media.”
But why should we believe her? She has provided no evidence. Why should we believe anything the Trump regime alleges? Neither Khalil nor Suri has been charged with a crime.
Or consider Venezuelan and Salvadoran men who have been detained by U.S. Immigration and Customs Enforcement. Where are they now? Their families don’t know. They’ve been disappeared over the past week, with no explanation provided by the government over why or where they may be.
None of these cases has been reviewed by a court of law. There have been no independent findings that any of these people constitute a danger to the United States, or even that their views are dangerous.
There’s not even been an independent finding that these people are non-Americans. For all we know, they could be just like you or me — Americans who have expressed views that the Trump regime dislikes.
Do you see how perilously close we are to the edge?

Jesse James Doty: Yes, and it scares the living daylights out of me.
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Life by Yolanda King: NSFW:
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/220266859-life from_search=true&from_srp=true&qid=kqzQoBs433&rank=2
Jasmine, a successful businesswoman, has achieved everything in life, both professionally and personally. Her life is quite perfect. She has four children, a great business, plenty of affairs, no lasting relationships.
Or is it perfect?
Explicit adult content

Still offering apologies to those I owe replied to but could not. I am still trying to take care of my eyes and health. Please forgive me.

patricia dillon: Don't worry about it. -
Alexandra Trovato : No worries. Feel better soon! -
I’m in my late fourties’ and decided to give another go at writing which I used to do all the time as a teenager even winning some awards for my writing.

Alexandra Trovato : Good for you! Enjoy!!
Alex
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2019 Short Works Writer of the Year
Dawn Munro
Poet Rating
Rank: 52
Short Works Rating
Rank: 6
Novel Rating
Script Rating
Review Stars
Rank: 105
Hey Everyone!
It is almost April and I'm excited for NaPoWriMo!
How has everyone been? Are you excited for NaPoWriMo, too? I was thinking of sponsoring the contest, unless someone else was already planning to. Any thoughts?

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~Dovey: Hi Lana! It can be a poem or just a prelude of what's to come. The trend over the years is to write it as a poem. I hope you'll join the contest, it is a lot of fun!
Kim
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Any comments about my new website would be welcome.
https://www.antonyfawcus.com/
It showcases my published work available on Amazon

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Sandra Stoner-Mitchell: I've just had a look, Tony. That is impressive! Did you do it yourself? If so, I'd like some tips. Yours is very professional looking. And your books, I didn't know you'd published so many! Very well done. 😊👏🏻👏🏻xxx -
Mrs. KT: Hello, Tony!
I echo Sandra's sentiments and observations.
Your website is very professional and a testimony to your creative talent!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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rspoet: Hello Tony,
You've created an excellent web site the should draw potential readers to Amazon to make their purchase.
I enjoyed the layout and descriptions.
One small suggestion: You might include some poems or excerpts from poems or novels. Nothing like a little taste or aroma to pull in the diner.
Well done
Best wishes with the site.
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I just want to add some information here By no means am I any type of critic whatsoever if I give you 1-6 stars it is what it is this is my second day on and I truly am enjoying it. I give reply’s and stars on how your writings make me feel use all emotion and personal thoughts to relate to your work and I say what comes to mind while I’m writing my reply which is directly after I read your work So please don’t take my words personally and I can take the feedback just as well since I’m learning as we go GodBless

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Sandra Stoner-Mitchell: We do follow a set of rules on FS, you can find them under Community' which is up the top of the page, then scroll down to Q&A scroll down to 'How many stars should I give something I read'
That will give you what each star represents. You can't down grade a piece just because it's not your genre, or just don't like the subject. If that is the case you skip it. This is just a friendly piece f advice seeing as you are new here. I hope you continue to enjoy writing on this site, we are a friendly bunch who help each other improve by giving advice when we are able. Welcome to Fanstory, MIchael. Warm regards, Sandra xx
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