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Can sometimes lead you to a dark place.26 total reviews
Comment from Harambe iz ur Daddy
Excellently done! Nice tight pacing and presentation with a perfect image to accompany it. If you want a dark twist... perhaps make it WHIPPED cream.
Thanks for the read,
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Excellently done! Nice tight pacing and presentation with a perfect image to accompany it. If you want a dark twist... perhaps make it WHIPPED cream.
Thanks for the read,
🦍
Comment Written 31-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thank you, it's great to hear from you. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Congratulations for winning this contest and I enjoyed your humorous post here with a magical punchline, cherries stain just like blood does! Ha ha ha, that cherry pie sounds delicious here, loved your inventive post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Congratulations for winning this contest and I enjoyed your humorous post here with a magical punchline, cherries stain just like blood does! Ha ha ha, that cherry pie sounds delicious here, loved your inventive post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 31-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Congrats on the contest win, boogienights and also for telling a great, little story and with a good twist. Cherry pie and icecream, sounds delicious and well worth breaking any diet for. LOL
cheers.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Congrats on the contest win, boogienights and also for telling a great, little story and with a good twist. Cherry pie and icecream, sounds delicious and well worth breaking any diet for. LOL
cheers.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Everytime l read this, l want cherry pie! Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review. :)
Comment from Crystal A Castaneda
Love the graphic and the words are excellent choice to describe it. I started to read it like I was feeling but had to laugh towards the end. Definitely changed my mood for the better.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Love the graphic and the words are excellent choice to describe it. I started to read it like I was feeling but had to laugh towards the end. Definitely changed my mood for the better.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thank you, l appreciate this terrific review. :)
Comment from prettybluebirds
I can see why your writing won the contest. The surprise ending is terrific. I think many people, including me, can relate to this story. Excellent writing and very creative.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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I can see why your writing won the contest. The surprise ending is terrific. I think many people, including me, can relate to this story. Excellent writing and very creative.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much for this great review. :)
Comment from JT traveller
Such intensity. Such a build up. I could feel my heart beat faster but then...what a clever and humurous twist.
A thoroughly enjoyable read. Thank you. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Such intensity. Such a build up. I could feel my heart beat faster but then...what a clever and humurous twist.
A thoroughly enjoyable read. Thank you. Jacqueline
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much for this great review. :)
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Thanks for the giggles. Jacqueline 😊
Comment from Thesis
Okay, you got me. Here I was all ready to find out what she killed, and then you identify that she killed the cherry pie, and broke her diet. Good ending twist. You built it up really well - good job.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Okay, you got me. Here I was all ready to find out what she killed, and then you identify that she killed the cherry pie, and broke her diet. Good ending twist. You built it up really well - good job.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Thank you, I appreciate this nice review. :)
Comment from RodG
I like how you misdirect our thinking throughout this veryshort story, making us think she is planning murder. The second paragraph really sets up the conflict both internal and external. Well done! It deserved to win. Rod
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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I like how you misdirect our thinking throughout this veryshort story, making us think she is planning murder. The second paragraph really sets up the conflict both internal and external. Well done! It deserved to win. Rod
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this positive review. :)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good 75-word flash fiction entry. The text is an okay size. It would be better one size larger. I like it being bold because that helps old eyes to see the text better. The message is stated with clarity and is easy to understand. I thought in the beginning the female was a cutter. I had several girls in my classes over the years who were. Great twist at the ending. Your visual fits perfectly. Congratulations, on having the winning entry.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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This is a good 75-word flash fiction entry. The text is an okay size. It would be better one size larger. I like it being bold because that helps old eyes to see the text better. The message is stated with clarity and is easy to understand. I thought in the beginning the female was a cutter. I had several girls in my classes over the years who were. Great twist at the ending. Your visual fits perfectly. Congratulations, on having the winning entry.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this wonderful review. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hah! Sharon!
Bravo!
And cherry pie no less!
Of course, the reader thinks the protagonist's intended target is a person!
I also thought she might have been considering doing something with her face!
Loved the ending!
Congratulations on your winning flash fiction!
diane
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Hah! Sharon!
Bravo!
And cherry pie no less!
Of course, the reader thinks the protagonist's intended target is a person!
I also thought she might have been considering doing something with her face!
Loved the ending!
Congratulations on your winning flash fiction!
diane
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this terrific review. :)