Comment from Harambe iz ur Daddy

Excellent

Excellently done! Nice tight pacing and presentation with a perfect image to accompany it. If you want a dark twist... perhaps make it WHIPPED cream.

Thanks for the read,

🦍

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025

Thank you, it's great to hear from you. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Congratulations for winning this contest and I enjoyed your humorous post here with a magical punchline, cherries stain just like blood does! Ha ha ha, that cherry pie sounds delicious here, loved your inventive post, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025

Thanks so much, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Exceptional

Congrats on the contest win, boogienights and also for telling a great, little story and with a good twist. Cherry pie and icecream, sounds delicious and well worth breaking any diet for. LOL
cheers.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024

Everytime l read this, l want cherry pie! Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review. :)

Comment from Crystal A Castaneda

Excellent

Love the graphic and the words are excellent choice to describe it. I started to read it like I was feeling but had to laugh towards the end. Definitely changed my mood for the better.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024

Thank you, l appreciate this terrific review. :)

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

I can see why your writing won the contest. The surprise ending is terrific. I think many people, including me, can relate to this story. Excellent writing and very creative.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024

Thanks so much for this great review. :)

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Such intensity. Such a build up. I could feel my heart beat faster but then...what a clever and humurous twist.

A thoroughly enjoyable read. Thank you. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Thanks so much for this great review. :)

reply by JT traveller on 16-Mar-2023

Thanks for the giggles. Jacqueline 😊

Comment from Thesis

Excellent

Okay, you got me. Here I was all ready to find out what she killed, and then you identify that she killed the cherry pie, and broke her diet. Good ending twist. You built it up really well - good job.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Thank you, I appreciate this nice review. :)

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I like how you misdirect our thinking throughout this veryshort story, making us think she is planning murder. The second paragraph really sets up the conflict both internal and external. Well done! It deserved to win. Rod

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Thank you for this positive review. :)

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good 75-word flash fiction entry. The text is an okay size. It would be better one size larger. I like it being bold because that helps old eyes to see the text better. The message is stated with clarity and is easy to understand. I thought in the beginning the female was a cutter. I had several girls in my classes over the years who were. Great twist at the ending. Your visual fits perfectly. Congratulations, on having the winning entry.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Thank you for this wonderful review. :)

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 16-Mar-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hah! Sharon!
Bravo!
And cherry pie no less!
Of course, the reader thinks the protagonist's intended target is a person!
I also thought she might have been considering doing something with her face!
Loved the ending!
Congratulations on your winning flash fiction!

diane

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Thank you for this terrific review. :)